Global Revision Process

While editing my paper for the social media project I started off by reading all of my comments. Then while reading over my draft I fixed things I felt needed to be fixed a while back. I fixed the way I cited my sources within the text. I fixed my claims by putting them in a spot that makes it easier for the reader to identify them. As well as checking in They Say I Say to find new ways to word things with them templates  throughout the book. I also added in more on what a naysayers side would be and more I say.

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  1. Hi, Victoria,
    I like that you used writing terms to describe your revision process. I am glad that you are using your resources as reference as you craft your essay. I look forward to reading the final draft!

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