Critique Sample 2

On my first draft for the Social Media Project I had highlighted mt paper. Each color represent something different- blue is for my first source, green is my second source, orange is my third source, and pink is “I say “.  This helped me realize where I needed to add in more of my say into the passage, as well as needing to connect my sources to relate to each other. I also went through and looked for where I needed to add punctuation or remove punctuation due to incorrect use of it.