Critical Sample 1

For my higher education essay, most of my comments where grammar-related and the others where to elaborate on my thoughts. For the essay there were several punctuation issues, as well as to elaborate my thoughts and what I believe. I would say I have improved with my grammar and punctuation issues with the help of the little sea gull book explaining it to me on how to use it the proper way. I also have improved in expressing my thoughts a little more. Although I have improved in these places I always have room to improve even more. Peer review has helped me change the way I see my writing. I have become more open minded during the editing process due to peer review. When writing I know what I will be looking for in the peer review, so that has helped me to understand what I should put into my essay when writing.